Thursday, May 12, 2011

Hungry. A Poem.

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  1. Wow.

  2. Ah-hahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!

  3. Uhm…?

  4. Dawn of the Dan


    Not bad! I want to know if he got his bologna.

  5. Is that a black people euphemism I don’t know about?

  6. Not bad at all, but this guy has some terrible taste in women…

  7. ifitwerentformyhorse

    The ending was perfect. He should write for Penthouse.

  8. Gimmie that bologna hoe!

  9. Dawn of Dan, I want to know that as well. And if he did get his bologna I want to know if was expired.

  10. Wow this poem is so good, I actually read it… twice.

  11. Fuck off Keats, Byron, Wordwsworth et al with your romantic flowery shit, there is a new kid on the block. Fo’ realz.

  12. not very nice calling the girl thick. He hadnt even spoken to her, she could be very bright indeed.

    Other than that it’s a literary masterpiece.

  13. Someone once said “Give a room full of monkeys keyboards and infinite time they would write Shakespeare”.

    I say “Give one ghetto scumbag a computer and he will produce this piece of shit.”

    And the monkeys would all be dead.

  14. at least, he wrote his “piece of shit” with pretty good grammar and spelling, which, I have to say, is more than can be said about a lot of the rubbish we see on here. the rest is a matter of taste… I’m not sure why he needs to be called a ghetto scumbag, tho…

  15. I am with Ruty? What makes him ghetto or a scumbag?

  16. The pose.

  17. I’m also pleased that you’re with Ruty, you make a lovely couple.

  18. @cockneyplebel, thick is in reference to her size not her intelligence

  19. Scottydug fail

  20. I always forget the difference between prose and poetry, but I seem to recall terms like rhyme and meter. Isn’t this prose? It doesn’t sound as hip as “a poem” I guess …

  21. Free verse, baby!

    Faded Glloooray!

  22. Well, he’s at least a decent writer. And he likes thick women. I approve.

  23. It’s a narrative prose poem.

  24. in free verse

  25. I like it. I think it’s hilarious.
    Ditto to ruty. His pose doesn’t mean he’s ghetto. He’s obviously educated enough to have correct grammar, and I don’t think posting a joke poem on Facebook qualifies him to be a scumbag.
    I also kind of want a Jell-o cup now.

  26. Comment 21 FTLW (for the literary win)

  27. @cockneyplebel : “Thick” isn’t a bad thing in America, Bro. It doesn’t mean dumb here. It means that a woman had a thick, curvaceous body.
    And This this nigga Phillip had me rolling at “like a jello cup” 😀

  28. did he have to say bologna? I would rather be compared to a steak. I am thoroughly impressed with his grammar though.

  29. The worst part about this post, is that this proves that there are people out there that are actually this stupid. Seriously, how do you think you are going to make it in life thinking and talking like this? This is supposed to be a poem? for love of humanity, kill yourself.

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